Common feedback from lecturers is that students' writing is too descriptive, not showing enough criticality: "too descriptive", "not supported by enough evidence", "unbalanced", "not enough critical analysis". This guide provides the foundations of critical writing along with some useful techniques to assist you in strengthening this skill.
Key features in critical writing include:
In order to be considered critical, academic writing must go beyond being merely descriptive. Whilst you may have some descriptive writing in your assignments to clarify terms or provide background information, it is important for the majority of your assignment to provide analysis and evaluation.
Description:
Define clearly what you are talking about, introduce a topic.
Analysis:
Analysis literally means to break down something into its components to better understand it. However, there is much more to analysis: you may at times need to examine and explain how the parts fit into a whole; give reasons; compare and contrast different elements; show your understanding of relationships. Analysis is, to much extent, context and subject specific.
Here are some possible analytical questions:
With analysis you challenge the “received knowledge” and your own your assumptions.
Evaluation:
Tip: Try to include a bit of description, analysis and evaluation in every paragraph. Writing strong paragraphs can help, as it reminds you to conclude each paragraph drawing a conclusion. However, you may also intersperse the analysis with evaluation, within the development of the paragraph. You may also find out that some parts of your work contain more description, analysis or evaluation. This could also be an effective way of structuring your critical text.
Presenting and defending an argument, with reasons and evidence, is a main expectation (and assessment criterion) of most essays and other forms of assessments, including dissertations. With argumentation you demonstrate critical thinking as you can draw conclusions and take a position you can defend on a topic.
What is an argument? In academic writing, an argument is the reason or set of reasons that demonstrate the validity of a thesis statement.
The view that you defend is called a thesis statement.
To write an effective argument, you will need to provide the following:
For more guidance on argumentation see page Argument and Criticality in the essay writing guide.
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